The pop's for a D3 are solid. the notes say to me he needs fundamental work.
Offensive notes are exit Velo is very very low. The comments of needs to connect lower body with upper, utilize lower half and develop extension, combined with the catching notes lead me to think that he hasn't had enough if any high level instruction.
if he is going to play in college my thought is a local CC first to work on his swing and over all game for a year, then reevaluate.