Linear,
As I told you before. "Shock and Awe" marketing is a bad idea.
Just state your opinions about how you teach hitting. That may have value. We know you have no credentials whatsoever - but you articulate well IMO. - And that may have value.
The rest of your stuff about youth coaching is utter nonsense. You need to travel a bit - get on the road for 100 days or so - go to the facilities - watch the coaching - and experience the real deal.
I know that isnt original - but You know what I know. The original marketing concept is failing - miserably.
LOL