Don we have been down this road before and I guess you did not like the answers the first time around....
http://community.hsbaseballweb...20#25088034649165820
Again, keep it simple and direct, no amount of "marketing" is going to make a coach want to have your son play for him and in fact if he came to this page he would likely run for the hills as it is a sign of an overbearing dad.
PS: Love the Domingo ref!
Follow fenway's advice. (and the other you got on your previous thread)
KISS and targeted is the best approach.