need video critique

Interesting wind-up, how is your accuaracy?
How are you going about doing your college search?
I think the vids are ok, in my experience, coaches seldom ask for vids. did you have to pay for this page?
Is your coach contacting any schools to have them come to scout you? This is one way to get a look. Sometimes your summer team can get you a look (It happened with my son..Actually TPM's son's head coach, Coach O'Sullivan at Florida now..Clemson then, saw my son and recommended him to the head coach at Ga. Southern).
Another approach could be to target a group of schools, ones that match up to your academic level, has a program that can help and assist you to what ever your end goal is. This means gets you a good competitive environment, the ability to develop and the opportunity to play. It may not be in your best interests to target a school that is flush with scholarship pitching in the lower classes..who wants to be on a Texas (for just an example) if you don't get to play at all your freshman year and get very little chance to play until you are a senior..if you even make it that far. So research is key. Once you get some prospective schools, contact them and find out if they have try-outs..many do. Get yourself there and show what you can do. All the stuff I mentioned didn't cost a penny except for time and of course the cost of the summer team.
Anyway all that said..you look like you care and love the art. Be dedicated and keep the faith if it is your hearts desire you'll be playing college ball, you have the skill.
My best wishes to you.