I like most of what I see.
The "shape" of the swing is there. By shape I'm talking about the path of the barrel. It's blurring backwards in an arch. The video is dark and the quality could be better, so I can't really tell exactly where the barrel is. I also can't tell exactly when and where contact is made. So I "guessed" when you made contact in order to synch you and Howard to "contact", which is how I usually synch clips.
There might be a little bat drag after your elbow tucks to your ribs. Again I can't really tell because of the video, so I won't say for sure.
I like how your head has minimal movement forward. I also like that your front knee opens into footplant and that your back knee turns with the front knee. This allows the hips to be opened at footplant. The hips being already opened creates separation between the hips and the hands. With this separation, all that you need to do is use your hands to get to the ball.
There is a difference in how high Howard's elbow starts and yours, but that's not an important detail right now. Before the barrel moves backwards both of your elbows' are are in the same position and "slotted".
There's more details I can write, but I'll wait and see your response and question first. Next time you take video, use a dark bat in a light background, or a light bat in a dark background, it let's use see the path of the bat better.
What kind of hitting cues have you been taught or have used?