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No metrics are included of course....And yep, a little too much time on my hands this evening. I used the following prompt/description to create it.

"Write an email to a college baseball coach telling him why you want to play at his school. Include details of your baseball skills and measurables."




Subject: Enthusiastic Prospect Seeking to Join Your Baseball Program

Dear Coach [Coach's Last Name],

I hope this email finds you well. My name is [Your Full Name], and I am writing to express my sincere interest in joining your esteemed baseball program at [College/University Name]. After careful research and consideration, I firmly believe that your program is the perfect fit for me, both academically and athletically.

First and foremost, I have been an avid baseball player since a young age, and my passion for the sport has only grown stronger over the years. I have dedicated countless hours to honing my skills and developing into a well-rounded athlete. As a [position(s)], I take great pride in my ability to contribute to the team's success through my strong work ethic, leadership qualities, and unwavering commitment.

Allow me to provide you with an overview of my baseball skills and measurables:

  1. Hitting: I have consistently displayed exceptional hand-eye coordination, enabling me to make solid contact with the ball consistently. I have a disciplined approach at the plate, which has resulted in a high on-base percentage throughout my playing career. My ability to drive the ball to all fields, coupled with my power and speed, has allowed me to be a consistent run-producer.

  2. Fielding: I take immense pride in my defensive capabilities and view it as a critical aspect of the game. My strong arm, quick reflexes, and excellent footwork allow me to excel in [specific position(s)]. I strive for perfection in every play, possessing a high baseball IQ and the ability to anticipate and react swiftly to various game situations.

  3. Speed: I consider myself a highly agile and fast player, which is a significant asset both on the base paths and in the field. My speed allows me to steal bases effectively, take extra bases, and cover a wide range of ground defensively.

  4. Work Ethic and Coachability: I am a relentless worker who is always striving to improve. I consistently put in extra time at practices, the gym, and during offseason workouts to enhance my skills and overall athleticism. I am also receptive to coaching feedback and take pride in my ability to implement adjustments quickly.

While my on-field performance is essential to me, I also prioritize my academics. I have maintained a rigorous academic schedule and understand the importance of balancing my studies and athletics effectively. The academic reputation and resources offered by [College/University Name] align perfectly with my ambitions, ensuring a well-rounded and fulfilling college experience.

I have been following your program's impressive track record of success, both in terms of athletic achievements and the development of well-rounded individuals. The values and culture your program instills in its players resonate deeply with me, and I believe that your coaching philosophy and mentorship will allow me to continue growing as a student-athlete.

I would be honored to have the opportunity to contribute to your program's continued success and make a positive impact on and off the field. I am confident that my skills, dedication, and passion for the game make me an excellent candidate for your team.

Please find attached my baseball resume, which includes my playing history, notable achievements, and contact information for my high school coach. I would be grateful if you could review it at your convenience.

Thank you for considering my application to join your baseball program. I look forward to the possibility of discussing my potential contributions to your team further. Should you require any additional information or have any questions, please do not hesitate to reach out to me.

Go [College/University Name]!

Sincerely,

[Your Full Name] [Your Contact Information]

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Ok provided more details. This is pretty impressive.

My prompt:

"Write an email to a college baseball coach telling him why you want to play at his school. You are a pitcher that has a 93mph fastball, 85mph change up, and 82mph slider. Include details of your pitching."





Subject: Enthusiastic Pitching Prospect Seeking Opportunity at [College Name]

Dear Coach [Last Name],

I hope this email finds you well. My name is [Your Name], and I am a dedicated and passionate pitcher who aspires to join the baseball program at [College Name]. After researching several collegiate baseball programs, I am genuinely impressed with the reputation and accomplishments of your team, and I am writing to express my keen interest in becoming a part of your program.

Allow me to introduce myself as a pitcher with a genuine love for the game and a strong work ethic. Over the years, I have honed my skills on the mound, developing a repertoire that I believe could make a meaningful impact on your team. I am thrilled to share some details about my pitching abilities:

  1. Fastball: I possess a consistent and powerful 93mph fastball that serves as my primary weapon on the mound. My dedication to conditioning and strength training has enabled me to maintain velocity deep into games, allowing me to challenge hitters and generate swings and misses.

  2. Change-up: As a complement to my fastball, I have developed an 85mph change-up that showcases significant movement and deceptive arm action. This pitch has become one of my most reliable tools, often fooling hitters and inducing weak contact or swing-and-miss situations.

  3. Slider: To further keep hitters off balance, I have mastered an 82mph slider that possesses sharp, late-breaking movement. This pitch serves as a valuable weapon against both left-handed and right-handed batters, allowing me to confidently attack different parts of the strike zone.

Apart from my pitching abilities, I am committed to continual growth and improvement. I understand that collegiate baseball demands discipline, dedication, and perseverance, and I am prepared to embrace the challenges that lie ahead. With an unwavering desire to succeed, I strive to be a leader both on and off the field, setting a positive example for my teammates through my strong work ethic and commitment to excellence.

While my pitching skills are undoubtedly important to me, I also value the significance of a well-rounded student-athlete experience. I am committed to my academic pursuits and believe that [College Name] will provide the ideal environment for me to excel both athletically and academically.

After reviewing the accomplishments of your program and the achievements of past and current players, I am inspired by the positive culture you have cultivated. I believe that joining the baseball team at [College Name] would provide me with the perfect opportunity to contribute to the team's success while continuing to develop my skills under the guidance of experienced coaches.

I would be honored to have the opportunity to discuss my potential contribution to your team in more detail. Please find attached my baseball résumé, which provides further information about my achievements, statistics, and references. I am also more than willing to attend any showcases, tryouts, or workouts that your coaching staff recommends to showcase my abilities firsthand.

Thank you for considering my application. I eagerly await your response and the chance to demonstrate my abilities to contribute to the future success of the [College Name] baseball program. I am confident that my passion, dedication, and skills would make me a valuable addition to the team.

Go [College Name]!

Sincerely,

[Your Name] [Contact Information]

@JucoDad posted:

It’s the death of essay homework… lol!

I made students put their phones on a mark I put on each desk when students took tests or did writing assignments.  Touch the phone and get a zero.  Also, schools have programs that allow the teacher to lock student computers (issued by the district) allowing only one site to be accessed which was the site the paper was being written.  For AP, students are often given 45 min to organize and write a paper.  That is then submitted on Google. 

This is the funniest thing I've read in a long time!  I hope that many baseball coaches are getting emails like this.  Oh, wait - didn't recruiting all move to twitter anyway?

Can ChatGPT come up with a good tweet that includes all this info?

I took @nycdad prompt "Write A TWEET to a college baseball coach telling him why you want to play at his school. You are a pitcher that has a 93mph fastball, 85mph change up, and 82mph slider. Include details of your pitching."

Didn't like the first reply I got and told ChatGPT to make it snappier and this is the tweet:

"Hey Coach [Coach's Name]! ⚾️ I've got a 93mph fastball, an 85mph changeup, and an 82mph slider in my pitching arsenal. 💪🔥 I'm ready to bring that heat and dominate on the mound for [School Name]. Your winning tradition and player development make it the perfect fit for me. Let's make some magic happen together! 🏆 #PitchingProspect #Future[SchoolName]Ace"

I took @nycdad prompt "Write A TWEET to a college baseball coach telling him why you want to play at his school. You are a pitcher that has a 93mph fastball, 85mph change up, and 82mph slider. Include details of your pitching."

Didn't like the first reply I got and told ChatGPT to make it snappier and this is the tweet:

"Hey Coach [Coach's Name]! ⚾️ I've got a 93mph fastball, an 85mph changeup, and an 82mph slider in my pitching arsenal. 💪🔥 I'm ready to bring that heat and dominate on the mound for [School Name]. Your winning tradition and player development make it the perfect fit for me. Let's make some magic happen together! 🏆 #PitchingProspect #Future[SchoolName]Ace"

That's a good point. First thing my son said when I showed him this was "No coach is reading that whole thing".

ChatGPT was way too wordy. No coach is going to read all of that

It should be more like:

Dear Coach (name)

I am sincerely interested in attending the U of ________ and being a part of your Baseball program.  I want to be a part of a winning program, with a great team culture.

I am a (height/weight) (position).  I run a (60 time) and throw (velocity #) and have a (number) exit velocity.  My GPA is (score) and my most recent SAT/ACT score is (score).

If interested please let me know and I can keep you up to date on my high school and travel ball schedule.

I have attached a few recent game videos.  I can be reached at (cell number) or via this email.

Thanks!

(full name)

@adbono posted:

That was my initial reaction as well

Concur.  I always thought it was very important to grab the coaches attention in the 1st sentence or even in the header of the email.  I always wondered if something like this would work:

Coach XXXX, I was at the the game last Saturday and noticed this hot mom sitting in the coach's booth.  Turns out it was your wife.  Man do you have an eye for talent, WHICH IS EXACLTY WHY YOU NEED ME IN YOUR PROGRAM.

then go into your baseball skills...................

My son is an absolute force in baseball. His swing? Picture-perfect, a thing of beauty. When he connects, that ball doesn't just leave the park—it goes into orbit! And his arm? Let's just say it's like a laser-guided missile. Scouts? They're practically on their knees, begging him to join their teams. Brace yourselves, because my boy is heading straight for stardom, but you all knew that already!

love ChatGPT!

Write a letter of introduction to the head baseball coach of Mississippi State expressing interest in playing baseball. Give subtile indications that you are a dog.

Dear Coach [Head Coach's Name],

I hope this letter finds you in high spirits. I recently had the pleasure of witnessing the remarkable achievements of the Mississippi State baseball program, and I must say, it left me howling with admiration. As I reflect on the teamwork, camaraderie, and passion displayed by the Bulldogs, I am inspired to share my own unique story and express my genuine interest in joining your esteemed team.

Throughout my "fetching" career, I have developed an insatiable love for the game of baseball. From the satisfying crack of the bat to the thrill of rounding the bases, the sport has captured my heart in ways that are difficult to express through human words alone. As a dog who appreciates the intricacies of the game, I have spent countless hours chasing balls, honing my agility, and mastering the art of teamwork.

Although my journey may seem unconventional, it has undoubtedly shaped me into a resilient and adaptable athlete. My heightened senses and lightning-fast reflexes have become my greatest assets, allowing me to track down fly balls with precision and cover ground in the outfield like no other. I have an uncanny ability to read the game, anticipating plays before they unfold, and providing an edge to any team fortunate enough to have me.

In addition to my physical attributes, I pride myself on embodying the core values that make baseball such a beloved sport: loyalty, dedication, and an unwavering spirit. My teammates, both human and canine, have always recognized my unwavering commitment to the game, as I offer unwavering support and encouragement, never hesitating to lend a paw when needed.

While I may not boast a traditional baseball résumé, I believe my passion, tenacity, and unique perspective on the game could bring a fresh breath of excitement to the Bulldogs. I am eager to learn from your esteemed coaching staff, collaborate with talented teammates, and contribute to the continued success of the program.

I would be honored to have the opportunity to discuss further how my skills, spirit, and wagging tail could enhance the Mississippi State baseball team. Thank you for considering my application, Coach [Head Coach's Name]. I eagerly anticipate the possibility of bringing my love for the game and my furry charm to the hallowed grounds of Mississippi State University.

I have attached my contact information, and I am available at your convenience for any further discussions. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]

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